Comments on: Memory of Everything (BETA)

By: sycross

sycross — Wed, 21 Jul 2010 14:37:38 +0000

Thanks so much Thamishi! I’m glad that you liked the song . I wish you luck too! I’ll try to keep you updated with new songs. I have a lot of new vocal stuff in the works .

By: Thamishi

Thamishi — Wed, 14 Jul 2010 21:25:35 +0000

Hey, greetnigs from Poland! I like the lyrics very much and the music is prefectly fitted to the atmosphere of the song! Great work, truly! I wish you luck in your music ( well, and in life too, of course:P). Can’t say antyhing about the technical metter, cause it’s not my cup of tea, but for a layman like me, it’s perfect!:D

By: sycross

sycross — Wed, 14 Jul 2010 13:37:37 +0000

Thanks for all the comments guys! I’m glad that most of you enjoyed the song, and I’ll definitely take your feedback into consideration when I revisit this song for the final album version .

By: Tim

Tim — Thu, 08 Jul 2010 08:32:43 +0000

You know I don’t think I’ve ever heard you sing. I know a piece of it is just the audio effects but you sounded really good.

I had absolutely no trouble following the lyrics and your final transition was very nice. It stands out but not so much that it feels out of place at all. Same as many other people though I did feel like that the revised chorus was a bit chaotic. Also the overlays in general could stand to be a bit softer with a touch of reverb to make it blend into the lead vocal track better, rather than it competing with it slightly.

By: sammyke

sammyke — Thu, 08 Jul 2010 06:04:29 +0000

hey Sycross happy to hear from you !!!
the song is great……….really iove it………the vocals are are good !! here and there a litle to loud !!
buth still a great song !!
keep going on
Sammy

By: Max M

Max M — Thu, 08 Jul 2010 05:14:41 +0000

I really like this track, and it’s nice to hear something new from you. I have a few comments though. I agree with Danni M that the alternate chorus has too much overlay. The vocals get a little muddled, especially in the last two lines. In the last verse, you have the lyric “And I need to know now/Could this ever have worked?” but I think that it would sound better if you added “out” to the end of that sentence. “Now” and “out” make a pseudo-rhyme which sounds better to me with the flow that the rest of the verse has set up.

By: Danni M

Danni M — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 21:14:02 +0000

I really like the entire song. Some sugesstions: I think the alternate chorus is too much voice overlay. But I like the last line of that chorus. The end of the song was very powerful. Overall, love the effects of the whole song. NICE JOB

By: firsthope

firsthope — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 19:50:12 +0000

It has been great work and I love this track very much ,Congratulations dear friend I wish you good luck all the time

By: Frost Bree

Frost Bree — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 19:45:16 +0000

Wonderful work. A talented songwriter with a beautiful voice;) Good luck Ray

By: Inanna

Inanna — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 18:29:23 +0000

Hello Sycross,
good to hear something from you !
I’m surprised…did listen a few time.
The lyrics are clear to understand
but from techincal side I cannot give you advise.
Generally it sounds very special and unique… I appreciate it much.
Congratulations.
Thank you for sharing.
Inanna